I can just imagine being the cat and staring at those stars. The sky was done wonderfully, but the brick wall seemed quite big in comparison with the sky. As with the stars - I love the swirly pattern, but the bright blue blot in the middle could be less bright, it's kind of jarring. But very pretty

Yay for Applejack, one of my favourite ponies

I love the colouring yay~

The perspective is good, but causes some changes that need to be made: The weirdest part of the picture though has to be the shadows - they're kind of awkward because they don't fall where they're supposed to. From this angle, you would expect the shadows to be a bit further back.

I found the first stanza very interesting and just had to read on - yep, for those of you who don't know, I'm too lazy to read most literature and only go by the first few lines I read. The rhythm itself "screams disarray", which is all right, considering the nature of the woman described. But the first two stanzas don't really fit in with the rest of the poem. It serves as a sort of prologue, but it doesn't join into the rest of the story - kind of like it's just been put there because you needed to.