Time erases all imprints from memory;
Like footprints in the sand
Everyone leaves a gaping depression
Lasting only a short while before
The wind eventually covers it
Similar to how sand fills an hourglass.
Or waves wash them away
In a manner not unlike
Tears cleansing the eyes.
However, you are the only person I will never forget;
For you have left, not footprints in the sand but,
Footprints in my heart.
I really like "In a manner not unlike" here, it suits the narrative voice and gives a maturity to the voice which allows for the narrators philosophical tone, which is very clever.
I would just look at the punctuation, because a couple of minutes of you looking at where you want the breaks to be saves the reader from having to work out where those breaks are, and means that they won't be distracted from your message.
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